martes, 20 de noviembre de 2012

Where I come from


Where I come from

The key idea of the poem seems to be that a person’s character is always formed at least in part by the place where he or she is born – “People are made of places”. Wherever you go in life you will carry with you memories and echoes of your birthplace, whether it is a city, as in the first stanza, or the quiet Canadian countryside where Elizabeth herself was born – “Where I come from, people carry woods in their minds” – and certainly the picture she draws in the second stanza does seem at first to be idyllic and wonderful, strongly contrasting with the city images in the first stanza.This idea shows us that who we are is shaped by where we were born and where we grew up, but this is not the end of the shaping process, as the first line suggests ‘People are made of places’, you are shaped as much by where you were born and grew up as the places that you go to after your childhood, the things that you experience in other places, the things that you see.

Stanza 1


This stanza deals with the organized and fast paced life of the city. In the city everything is precise and controlled; everything runs like clockwork. • Line 1-3: The first two lines of the poem summarise the main theme of the poem perfectly. ‘People are made of places.’ As the theme suggests people will never be able to forget their past, or where they came from.

People will always be able to tell where you come from ‘They carry with them hints of jungles or mountains, a tropic grace or the cool eyes of seagazers.’

• Line 3-4: ‘Atmosphere of cities how different drops from them’ The author is trying to show that the atmosphere of the place you live in can affect the way that you live, throughout the year as nature progresses through its

seasons, atmospherically city life changes greatly.

Line 4-5: ‘Like the smell of smog or the almost-not-smell of tulips in the spring’, smog telling us about a typical winters day with density of the air being greater and the water vapor blinding our site, ‘the almost-not-smell of tulips in the spring’ this tells us how the flowers of spring are starting to blossom, not fully produced and grown the smell of the tulips can not yet be

appreciated fully and with the combined smells of the city one could think

that they are smelling the tulips when actually the city life prevents the scent of the tulip to a high degree.

• Line 6-7: The idea of the city being organized and tidily planned out is introduced in these lines, ‘nature tidily plotted in little squares with a fountain in the center’, telling us that within the city life, nature still exists in

public parks, which have been plotted around the city in small areas to provide the reassurance of sanity within the community, that nature still exists within the city environment but is scarce and nature cannot go about

its business how intended to because of the interruptions of city life and pollution.

Line 7-8: ‘museum smell, art also tidily plotted with a guidebook’. This compares the tidily plotted countryside to tidily plotted art in an art museum, with a guidebook. The guide book can be a metaphor for life, we try to control everything, to guide ourselves through life instead of taking one step at a time.

• Line 9-10: ‘the smell of work, glue factories maybe, chromium-plated offices’, the city is full of skyscraping office buildings built of steel and other sharp precise materials to give a uniform look and feel to the atmosphere, also with great complexes comes great amounts of pollution, which Elizabeth is relating to with ‘the smell of work, glue factories maybe’.

• Line 10-11: In the end of the stanza ‘smell of subways crowded at rush hours’, this shows the congestion that is caused by overpopulation of the city. It also shows how rushed life in the city is. Also it shows that at the end of the day, no matter where you come from, if you work in chromium plated offices or glue factories, everyone has the same goal and that is to get home.

Stanza 2


The second stanza introduces an idea change in the poem. The focus of

the poem now shifts more to country and rural life; similar to that in which Brewster herself grew up in.

• Line 12-13: These lines provide us with key details in which we can relate to Brewster’s childhood, ‘Where I come from, people carry woods in their minds, acres of pine woods’. Coming from New Brunswick, Canada, is 80% forested and so the forest or ‘woods’ will always be in the peoples minds as it is the centre of the little community.

• Line 14: People here care about things that people in the city would laugh at, like ‘blueberry patches in the burned-out bush’. To the people in the community this is relatively significant as it is the growing of something new where before there was nothing.

Life 15: ‘wooden farmhouses, old, in need of paint’. This is in direct contrast to the first stanza where everything is new and attractive. The old farmhouses are there solely to serve a purpose and until they stop serving that purpose they will be kept, regardless of looks.

• Line 16-17: Brewster portrays a farming life with the ideas of chickens and

hens kept in yards, generally used to provide a source of food in the form of

eggs, or literally speaking the chickens themselves. Also the chickens and hens being kept in yards, shows us that in the country there is the room to spare to be able to keep these chickens and hens, whereas in conjunction with the first stanza, the chickens would not be kept as there is no room nor is there any need to keeping the chickens and hens.

• Line 17-18: ‘The battered schoolhouse’ again places emphasis on it being an old building remaining only for practical purposes and not being replaced by a more attractive building. ‘behind which violets grow’ just backs up the earlier line of ‘blueberry's growing in the burnt out bush’, it shows how nature can create a picture of beauty anywhere, out of anything.

Line 18-19: ‘Spring and winter are the mind’s chief seasons: ice and the breaking of ice.’ Spring and winter are two opposing seasons and winter could therefore represent the cold city life and spring the colorful country life. ‘Ice and breaking of ice’ refers to something in the mind that is broken when one makes the transition from the city to the country.

• Line 20-21: ‘A door in the mind blows open, and there blows a frosty wind from fields of snow.’ The last two lines are puzzling. The door blowing open is just another gateway opening in the mind to the memories that she holds of her childhood. The second half these lines ‘and there blows a frosty wind from fields of snow.’ is there to give a feel to the picture that she has been

describing and it gives the reader a cold feeling. The frosty wind from the

fields of snow is relevant because in Canada the winter is very frosty with a

lot of snow and wind.

The last 2 lines of the poem:

The "door" could be the memory opening in a blast of nostalgia, but the

association of winter and the "frosty wind" suggest something less pleasant,

like a realisation that the past, her place, is not so good after all. This is

supported by the content of the second stanza, where things may seem

superficially attractive in a rustic way, but are “burned out”, “old, in need of paint”, where the chickins cluck “aimlessly” and buildings are “battered”. So the suggestion is that it is easy to remember formative places all to positively, but their legacy can be negative; a “frosty wind” in the mind?


Kevin Halligan


 

He is a Canadian poet and writer who was born in 1964. Halligan grew up in Toronto. He lived abroad for many years, in England and Cambodia, before returning to Canada. His collections include Blossom Street (1999), The Belfast of the North (2005) and Utopia (2009). For several years he edited the poetry 'zine Earlscourt.

His early work shows the influence of the English poet Peter Reading, who welcomed Blossom Street in a review in the Times Literary Supplement as "different from the general ruck" and noted "the sensation of slight unease and of exile" created by the poems.

The Cockroach


 

I watched a giant cockroach start to pace,

Skirting a ball of dust that road the floor.

At first he seemed quite satisfied to trace

A path between the wainscot and the door,

But soon he turned to jog in crooked rings,

Circling the rusty table leg and back,

And flipping right over to scratch his wings-

As if the victim of a mild attack

Of restlessness that worsened over time.

After a while, he climbed an open shelf

And stopped. He looked uncertain where to go.

Was this due payment for some vicious crime

A former life had led to? I don’t know

Except I thought I recognized myself.

Analysis


'The Cockroach' by Kevin Halligan is a poem about reflection on life through watching the movement of a cockroach. Through the use of structure, detailed description of cockroach as an extended metaphor of the persona, the theme of confusion and realization of life is well conveyed.

Halligan describes a frantic movement of the cockroach throughout the poem. However, the poem opens with the exaggeration of it 'a giant cockroach'. This highlights that he is observing it very closely feeling as if it is a 'giant'. The word 'giant' also conveys that it is not only an insect but also a device to reflect on life giving it great importance with the repetition of word 'cockroach' in the title and first line.
The cockroach is an extended metaphor of the persona and human being. The cockroach moves through 'a path between the wainscot and the door' which symbolizes a steady path that people follow early in life. But, 'soon he turned to jog in crooked rings' suggests human being's confusion in later life reinforcing a sense of confusion of human being through an image of cockroach. The readers also sense the confusion and pain in the poem creating an interest for the poem- for the scene of a cockroach moving. The sense of confusion continues to be expressed through dictions 'restlessness' 'flipping right over' 'victim for a mild attack'. The line 'flipping right over' symbolizes the change in tone and change in the way that poem develops. The man feels lost and confused and doesn´t know where to go.